Reviews for Water's Dance
Heather A. Moeller chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
Nice imagery , very easy to see the water, and it made me think of some of my favorite outdoor places...so nicely written.
Seraphim of the Dark Moon chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
Very very good poem. The imagery...very *ahem* energetic water. Poem flows fairly well, although breaking the stanzas with punctuation makes it a little choppy. Overall, well done. Keep writing! Blessings.