Reviews for Phone
Lapin de la Flouve chapter 1 . 10/27/2003
I like this poem a lot. I'm having the same problem with a guy I know.

LF*

thanks for the great review

May I ask my guy if a rabbit took his phone?
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
It was simple, but it conveyed the feeling that many peopel have feeled before very well.

One thing:

"Aliens came down and too you to mars?"

I'm nearly positive that the "too" should be "took." Just something to revise maybe.

As always though, not your best work but beautiful to say the least.
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
oh that is so good, its got a very hilarious side and then at the end it kinda sad, its brilliant, loved it, really good i think its real hard to write something that can b funny and sad too. love and good luck, Phoenix

PS: oh and thnx for reviewing some of my stuff, it means a lot to me too(i'm the most paranoid person in the world concernign my poems, i've never showed them to anyone so know its so weird to know some ppl like them, i'm so scared every1 will hate them so i'm terribly happy when ppl like them) :).
Shy Cutie89 chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
that was a really good , do i know how you feel. I hope everything works out for ya.