Reviews for The Moment
BrownEyedBeauty chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
This was very good, and very well written. Good job, I really liked it. The feelings in it are clear and understood and it was nice to read.
makeitcount chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
i hated this
Pharaoh's Wife chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
That was beautiful
SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Very well written. Explaining whats going through your mind really well. Like it a lot.

Spawny
Judge Jury Executioner chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
Amazing story. The shear emotion exhibited in this is astounding.
Sage Valkisco chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
Very good, impressed, blown away, the emotion in this, intense