Reviews for Saved
Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Neat job, again! Really good cut poem. Keep it up!
Children of the Root chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
Beautiful. I like how the last two were regular haikus but the rest where cut haikus. Good way to mix them. Awesome imagery.
Needa S chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
Wow..Soo beautiful..No I've never tried to write a sonnet I have no idea of what it is. Thanks for your reviews..Keep writing!
The Black Rider chapter 1 . 9/13/2003
Beautiful. I loved how it started as a cut poem and then went into a haiku, at which point the language was nothing short of gorgeous. Keep writing.
Mime chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Wow, I've done some cut haiku too, but mine are nothing compared to yours. Awesome poem!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 9/12/2003

~Heart of the Sword
Paradoxical Goddess chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
akk! these are very, very cool/original. the first and second ones are my favorite, i think. :)
ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Sweet poem. I like how you used italic at that part to change the emphasis/tone/ never mind.

This was touching.
swirlygirl chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
that was beautiful awesome work ..keep writing
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
Gentle, depression all blended in this awesome haiku. Brilliant!
teh tarik chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
That was most beautifully written! You're great at writing cut haiku! I loved it a lot! Keep writing more!