Oh my gosh, you are the only other person who has rewritten this myth on fictionpress. I am currently working on my version... AND YOURS IS SO FUNNY!

Omg! A great twist to one of my favorite Norse most of the books I've read on Norse myths, Thor is not the brightest blub in the bunch. By the mental image of my favorite Loki in a frilly dress kept me smiling.

That was so fuckin funny. I loved it!

This was great. I shall continue.

-PTG

..."MJOLNIR! COME HERE BOY!" Loved that.

Well that was...
A. Pointless.
B. Amusing (albeit very modern)
I liked the story overall, for cute fluff. Thor is not very smart, but I think you overplayed his stupidity.
Oh, and I love Loki. He's such a babe. Again with the cute story bit.

Amusing. I love the last chapter. I want to read more of your humor fictions!

First, my nerdy nitpicking. Thor isn't dumb. At least not about battle. Thor is just what we would call a "non-intellectual."
But, I absolutely love this story. It's extremely funny.

So, so very funny. Once again, your success in making it that way is partly due to the choas you've written it with- not being able to tell what part of the myth you'll twist next, and it made for fun, amusing reading. not the traditional form of the myth- but that's the purpose of fiction. I liked it.

Cheers!

Good job. I love the Rastafarian touch and agree with another reviewer that the chaos is what makes it the most fun.
That said, I think the first chapter was the best. I had tears streaming down my eyes from laughing so hard. The ending image was great (i.e. Thor calling Mjollnir). Great ride...thanks for letting us on it.

*chuckles* Very very true... always look behind the veil _. Nice little story and entertaining to say the least. Great job. Keep writing!
Peachez _

lol, Good Gods... Thor and Loki in dresses... rotflmao! That's great! I have to keep reading... - love it when you keep updating like this.
Peachez _

*laughs uproariously, discovers she can't stop, and dies of asphyxiation after laughing for three hours straight*

While I have to agree with your first reviewer and say Thor isn't quite that stupid (though as much of an acoholic) you are obviously not writing about the mythological Thor, so it's perfectly excusable.

I LOVE this myth- its very funny, and your flamboyant style of writing makes it twice as much. The story itself is well done due to chaos, if that makes any sense at all. (If it doesn't, not that I'm crazy.)

Cheers.

I love this story! You've got a great sense of humor and I love how you portray the characters. Please update soon.

lol, I loved it! God, the way you write is so fun! Continue, please?