Reviews for Yin and Yang
auburnfusion chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Wow, exceptional poem. Really love the contrasting yet merging effect it portrays as well as the cartoon references (you a big fan of Yu-Gi-Oh? P) and the other words you used too (e.g. "Brain and Brawn").

I'm kind of having a hard time understanding one of the last lines of this poem because if you say "Time for balance. Time for gray. Yin and Yang." then why would you say "Bring today"? I know you want to rhyme and all, but "Bring today"? That doesn't make much sense with the rest of the poem. If you can elaborate a little bit more on that, perhaps the poem will be exceptionally well-done. Either way, I still think it's terrific. Looking forward to reading more of your work!


Lex C chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
interesting. Cool examples of "yin and yang" type pairs.