|Reviews for Enough of War|
| Birdaloo chapter 1 . 12/25/2003
i hate war. its whats destroying humanity. this nails it baby girl! makes me want to brain wash the entier nation jsut so we can have PEACE!
| light of middle earth chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
Good save the thought/ fought ryhme breaking the rhyme scheme (ABAB)and then agian fought/ bought. The again if you wanna sound deep you can claim that it is due to the disruption of war :)
| Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
You get a standing ovation for that one! Excellent work! You seemed to get the message across again very well. i think this is the best thing I've read yet that you've written.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
P.S. If you loved my dedication, I think you'll like my poem "Saint Sinner: The Man Full of Pins" even more. Fair warning though, it's about a man who sells his soul to the Devil.
| me10 chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
ive never read a poem like that b4. i have never read a war poem, mainly cos it just upsets me. i hate war. but your poem was so good and explained war so well.
| Aishestel chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
This is a beautiful and truthful poem... nice work... It's so real... We only realise what a war really is when we face it... keep on writting you have a nice style... and Peace...
| Seras Nova chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
A remarkable poem that stressed your point. Nice work.