|Reviews for Wondering|
| Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
Aw, what a pretty poem! I love the imagery in this... and the line about the shooting star seeing as it runs... very clever! And where the angels fear to tread... very creative line. I LOVE THE IMAGERY!
| light of middle earth chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
This is clever in how you switch ryhme schemes from each stanza. I have not read the word yonder in ages lol. A nice word... I don't quite understand the last stanza but could you explain it. I am sure it has a deeper meaning i can not quite grasp. Is it what the summers etc. will be like when you no longer see them. Or that what it would be like with out a spring or summer? Urgh, confused! lol,
| Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
A bit of an odd rhyming pattern there, but it was still a very pretty poem. I love LOTR, too, so I can picture all these places. That was a good poem.
Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
| xyellx chapter 1 . 9/8/2003
Wonder and yonder do not rhyme and your poem has weird rhyming schemes but other than that it is a pretty good poem.