Reviews for happy.blood.
K's Moonshadow chapter 1 . 8/31/2006
This is really good, I especially like the last two lines. Very powerful. Keep writing!
lastwrites chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
I like. Good job. :D
Liz chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
There are some very powerful imagery and emotions expressed in this poem of yours. But don't feel pressured to rhyme your lines just because it's poetry though, some of the best poetry I've read contains no rhyming lines.
v-double-ee chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
wow. great piece of work.
twilightrunner chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Oh my gosh, that's it EXACTLY. Nice description.
sixPAC chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
WOW, this was absolutly beautiful, i loved. Great description and i love how you closed. beautiful
asjkfdsl chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
confwuzzled chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
wow...holy jebus that was good!
K. T. Wood chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Amazing. That was awesome. I'm not usually one for poetry. But I couldn't go past this. Good job. Good length too. Excellent work.
RyanDrei chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
How did you come up with this its really dark, which is probably why I like it...
gooey chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Wow its a great poem. It flows really well and the words are chosen so right. It feels like im cutting myself.. hmm nice one!gooey
you cant write chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
LAME! You suck big fat monkey balls
Shadowed Soul chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
The last line is the best. 'The numbness makes her cry' is one of the best ways of decribing it. After being numb for so long you hardly realise it anymore. When you do it's scary. You realise that the only things you feel are sadness, depression, anger, guilt. At least when you cry you realise you're not completely numb because there's part of you that doesn't want to be. Perfect line.
hybrid-cookie chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
morbidme chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
so very very trueXmeX
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