| Reviews for happy.blood. |
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   K's Moonshadow chapter 1 . 8/31/2006 This is really good, I especially like the last two lines. Very powerful. Keep writing! |
| lastwrites chapter 1 . 7/14/2006 I like. Good job. :D |
| Liz chapter 1 . 7/3/2006 There are some very powerful imagery and emotions expressed in this poem of yours. But don't feel pressured to rhyme your lines just because it's poetry though, some of the best poetry I've read contains no rhyming lines. |
| v-double-ee chapter 1 . 7/1/2006 wow. great piece of work. |
| twilightrunner chapter 1 . 5/5/2006 Oh my gosh, that's it EXACTLY. Nice description. |
| sixPAC chapter 1 . 4/30/2006 WOW, this was absolutly beautiful, i loved. Great description and i love how you closed. beautiful |
| asjkfdsl chapter 1 . 12/8/2005 lovely |
| confwuzzled chapter 1 . 8/21/2005 wow...holy jebus that was good! |
| K. T. Wood chapter 1 . 6/2/2005 Amazing. That was awesome. I'm not usually one for poetry. But I couldn't go past this. Good job. Good length too. Excellent work. |
| RyanDrei chapter 1 . 5/16/2005 How did you come up with this its really dark, which is probably why I like it... |
| gooey chapter 1 . 5/12/2005 Wow its a great poem. It flows really well and the words are chosen so right. It feels like im cutting myself.. hmm nice one!gooey |
| you cant write chapter 1 . 5/7/2005 LAME! You suck big fat monkey balls |
| Shadowed Soul chapter 1 . 3/31/2005 The last line is the best. 'The numbness makes her cry' is one of the best ways of decribing it. After being numb for so long you hardly realise it anymore. When you do it's scary. You realise that the only things you feel are sadness, depression, anger, guilt. At least when you cry you realise you're not completely numb because there's part of you that doesn't want to be. Perfect line. |
| hybrid-cookie chapter 1 . 2/19/2005 Aw |
| morbidme chapter 1 . 2/16/2005 so very very trueXmeX |