| Reviews for Gift of the Shadoran |
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   cinnamon-24 chapter 2 . 12/7/2005 nice |
| Charlotte chapter 1 . 10/10/2003 Enjoyed the story very much. can't wait for the next chapter. The story shows good imagination, and leaves you wanting to know what hapens next. the only part that confused me was. was Kitari in a book and als in a video? It got me thinking. always a good sign. GOOD LUCK lets know when the next chapter is |
| Avalon's Guardian chapter 2 . 9/12/2003 Not bad. The chapters need to be longer though. Update soon. |
| Lappy chapter 2 . 9/9/2003 Okay! This is a great first story! I like it, the plot so far is really good. I suggest that you save your files in web page format though. It will make everything more spaced out and it might look better. But that's you're choice. Update as soon as possible! |
| Stacy Turner chapter 1 . 9/9/2003 This is an excellently written story. It confuses me a little, going from one plot line to the other like it does, but I'm sure I'll understand more as the other chapters unfold. *beam* |