Reviews for The Right Time
Calliope chapter 9 . 9/22/2008
Is there no more? :( I love this story.
Deliah Minicet chapter 9 . 9/2/2004
Uh oh! Dun, dun, dun... Unexpected twist :) Nice update; i wonder how sir alaric is going to take the news :)
passion101 chapter 9 . 9/2/2004
Uh oh, now wuts gonna happen?
zagato chapter 9 . 9/2/2004
good chapter. i wonder how alaric would take this. maybe he could come with her to the future.
passion101 chapter 8 . 8/10/2004
So the cowardly knight wasn't so in this chapter aye? lol, he's so funny!
Deliah Minicet chapter 8 . 8/7/2004
Good update :) Sir Alaric did something valiant! Yay! The only thing that I have to comment about your writing in general is that you tend to resolve things too quickly... i know readers are always impatient to get to the good part, as are the writers, but stories are usually better if that does not come super quickly but gradually after the plot before it has built it up... you are doing well with the Sir Alaric and Chloe part, but the whole Agatha and William part seemed a little sudden... all in all, though, your stories are great :) update again soon! (oh yeah, and this is veggiehead; I finally got an account!)
zagato chapter 7 . 7/24/2004
this is good.
Chione chapter 7 . 6/14/2004
Heavily armed boy scout? Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha! never heard that one before.
Very entertaining. Chloe's got herself in a bit of a mess, ne?
And Alaric seems like a nice enough coward, although it'd be nice to know why he's such a coward in battle. . . . . I suppose that comes later though, right?
So keep up the good work!
Liriel87 chapter 7 . 6/13/2004
Good chapter. . . full of cuteness. Update soon!
Veggiehead chapter 7 . 6/12/2004
Another nice update :) Poor Agatha though :( ...can't think of any constructive criticism, so just keep writing and update again soon :)
Rachel Maurine chapter 7 . 6/12/2004
hey, i read your story, and its pretty good. update soon!
passion101 chapter 7 . 6/11/2004
This story is really cute. I've never read anything like it before so it's refreshing. Although more detail would be nice. It's kinda jumpy too.
Liriel87 chapter 6 . 5/19/2004
hehe wow an update. . . i dont rightly remember what is going on but hey i hope alaric gets over his cowardice. update soon!
Veggiehead chapter 6 . 5/19/2004
Nice update! I'm glad you overcame your writer's block! Update soon, please? :) lol It was worth the wait though :) Poor Alaric, I hope he gains some courage!
Amitaipie chapter 5 . 3/30/2004
ahh! don't stop there! whats going to happen? quick quick quick. update .
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