|Reviews for Father, Hold My Hand|
| GoodBye Everybody chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
Even though I am Atheist, I have to admit, this poem made me emotional a little. It was short, but very sweet with a touching message. It makes me want to go back to Catholicism.
We shall see what happens. :)
*The Mighty Sisto*
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
I think that we all can relate to this. Very nice flow throughout most of it too, and the rhyme doesn't seem forced at all. I enjoyed reading this. write on!
| livintheLyt chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
great poem! and so true. :)
| Abby E chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
I really liked this poem...I pray that every day...keep writing for the Lord!
| Lisa A. M chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
a really nice poem, I like the ryme! It's touching:)
| KerouacandGin chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
Hey Emma, its Katelyn. Its weird how I read this. I just saw it and read it and then found out it was by you! Strange. But anyways, I really like it. )
| Apphish chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
Short and sweet. And it rhymes. I love it when people manage to get their poetry to rhyme in a such a fluent way. Good on you!