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JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
Oh! I love romance poems, I'm too darn soft hearted! I loved the lines:

"And ask you and me who we are

And we would reply from the tallest block in town

We are strong, together the brightest star"

"Sniff" It's so powerful, I want a relationship that would last like that.
Meteoric Piscatrix chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
the more i read your work, the more i like it. how about "sandcastles" as a title - symbolic of childhood/ innocence/ temporary/ vulnerable to the waves/ washed away.
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
oh, that is so swet, so qt, and really touching, i loved it, write more. i dunno bout da title tho. kisses and good luck. Phoenix