Reviews for A few stumbled words
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
I really liked the ending, and the poem was also magnificent. Great work!
Winged One1 chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
I like it! I think its about...I dont know. Never mind. Forget I ever said anything.

Good poem!

winged one
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
that is so good, honestly, brilliant, very very bood, loved it, keep writing. love and good luck, Phoenix
ShadowGal chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
Pretty good. A few parts didn't flow as well as others, but that's not too big a deal. Overall, nice. I especially like some of the imagery you used.