|Reviews for A few stumbled words|
| JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
I really liked the ending, and the poem was also magnificent. Great work!
| Winged One1 chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
I like it! I think its about...I dont know. Never mind. Forget I ever said anything.
| Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
that is so good, honestly, brilliant, very very bood, loved it, keep writing. love and good luck, Phoenix
| ShadowGal chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
Pretty good. A few parts didn't flow as well as others, but that's not too big a deal. Overall, nice. I especially like some of the imagery you used.