|Reviews for The Magician|
| deadaccount38289 chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
aw, this was really sweet, and packed a lot of emotion for such a short story. and the ending line was fantastic. very nice :)
| patsylooj chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
i really like this. i had all these vivid images in my mind when i read it. the whole thing had this light mood to it, even though the lovely boy is like "go to hell" the entire time.
it's funny, how some of the long, epic chapter stories on here are crap, then the little things like this are ten times better.
makes me smile.
| Rimma chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
Wow... -sniff- That was... Beatutiful.
No, honestly. You conveyed emotions quite well in this one. However, I think readers might find it less confusing if you used qoutes(") or apostrophes(') like me to define speech, rather than a dash.
| subversives chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
Once again,I commend you on a job well done. Your writing style is something to be envied. as well as the situations and characters you come up with. I love how this story is pretty much one scene between two people, but somehow you manage to put so much feeling into it.
Good luck with your future writing!
| blushed-moonlight chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
OOh I like it! It's wonderful!But then again, everything you write is fab so i bet you're getting tired of me reviewing the same thing for everything you write hey? Lol oh well can't help it! I like the last three lines. perfect
| soccerball2 chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
impressive writing, good detail, but I'm not sure I can agree with considering the rain dreary, it seems like everything is so much more alive when it's raining.
| justin chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
very well written. the whole short story seemed to echo with a slight scent of FLCL... which I can't complain cause I am partial to such plots and characters.. btw - i like how you incorporated your personal turn-ons in a guy and modeled the boy after them. very cute.