Reviews for I wish
SashaJade chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
Very bitter, but understandable. A good poem, heartfelt if nothing else. Perhaps I only empathize at the moment, but it has an irresistable ring of truth to it.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Great revenge poem! Very unexpected twist, I expected the last stanza, but the last line, just, wow.
me10 chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
i LOVE the twist at the end, its really powerful and clever. great work!
Obsessed Dreamer chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
that was great! at first i thought u felt left out, and then you ended up being revengeful. i liked it alot! keep writing more! I wish i could write better.
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
oh you do have an evil side! Will if this is true may you crush him like he was a cockroach!
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Oh-harsh.

At first, it seems like you want to be noticed or worshipped or loved or accepted. The third stanza is strong and seemingly sweet- yearning for love.

And then... unexpectedly sharp ending- and we see it's for an entirely different reason than we thought. Revenge.
lil'poetgirl chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
aww, hon, you dont need to change for a guy.. but thats a very effective ending.
Nerf chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
I reli like the solemn tone at the begining of the poem, that was changed quickly to anger, and done very nicely.

Just wish it were a little longer.

Great poem.

XXNerfxx