Reviews for Unbearable Urge
skullszeyes chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
i can relate...
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I like the title. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
forever fallen chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
*claps* Very nice boyo. And I thank you muchly for that speeling mistake you spotted.

it was fine untill I let my spell check at it. *...ehh opps? But going back to your work,

I like it. The very thoughts of a cutter. *claps again*
Sarah Parker chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
I love this.. I like your style of writing but I really love this poem because it's so true and I've been there... too many times to count... you described that unbearable urge perfectly.
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
mm unbearbale urge gets my vote :) and its a good poem but it would be better if it was a little longer maybe?
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
I think cutting is stupid...but I have done it.
Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
*collapses onto floor* Okay, thats good for me to be able to see what its like on the other side of the story, for the person who's cutting, instead of the friend (myself) who spends hours and hours counselling and not being listened to, or being listened to and then being ignored and how much flippin heartache it brings. Anyway, thanks for that! ~Starlight
Strawberry Chapstick chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Unbearable urge sounds good _ Unfortunately, true to live. Pretty poem, though.
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 9/13/2003
Wow, deep
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Short, but strong and yearning, yet worried about possible consequences.

'All it takes' so close to it, so wishing to be able to.

'But if you're asked' worried about someone finding out- the thought of telling someone with good consequences doesn't even seem a possibility.

'you know it's wrong'- but you just can't help it. 'the urge is unbearable'. Experessed very realistically.