Reviews for One Last Time
MagenDavid chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
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I am so speechless...
Etheral chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
Interesting. Realy cool. Very interesting vocabulary too!
Great job!
Alyssha
Mbwun chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
Kinda sad and kinda uplifting at the same time. And your vocabulary beat me silly, I had to look up "chartreuse".:) Good poem.

He Who Walks On All Fours
XtrM chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
The only real flaw I can find is the rhyming. The rhyming itself isn't bad, I'm just trying to get my word out that poems are usually better, if not more mature, when rhyming is left out.
Nemesis-Wolf chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
Wow. I like this poem a lot. It's really good. If i've already said this, then, let me say it again, your quite talented.
insert name here chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
...wow...im speachless, theres nothing i can say to do this piece justice in my review, just know that it was beyond amazing...

brendz
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
very sweet.. I like it a lot