The link in your author's note didn't come out at all. I don't think this site likes people posting links on it. I had a similar problem when I was doing the reference page for 'destiny'. I had to put spaces in the web address for them to come out.
Anyway, excellent chapter! Mya definately does sound like the perfect gentleman, doesn't he? He's great! Definately one of my favourites! I hope Zeth does discover more nymphs, cos it would be nice for her to be around others of her kind. She wouldn't feel like she's weird then. O, big battle coming up...I can't wait! Jade and Nika fighting against each other...that's gonna be good. I hope you post more soon!

Yay! you updated! lol.. we're just a great big love fest aren't we? lol... but yeah.. now i have a big prob cuz i realised i don't want an entire SPECIES to exist so i have to rewrite up to that point and repost... so i dont' know if i'm gonna take it down and put up and sign saying that i'm fixing it or what.. but yeah.. tis fun george..
may.. zeth needs a hobby..
FANGOAR RULES! mwah ha ha

Hey!
"Zeth! You betrayed Nika! I hope you know that anything that happens to her from now on will be entirely 100% your fault. I hope you feel bad about it and feel guilty for the rest of your life!"
This was even better! I like the Mya taking Nika's side thing...Malice must feel so left out! Kidding!
Yes, I want to update but...still stuck on chapter three! There's no humour and I don't like how Makira meets her first companion! Any ideas?

Hey!
Great new chapter! The whole Nika - Malice - Fangroar - April thing is really funny! And Zeth! Wow! Is she irritating or what!
Anyways, my sister didn't like the comments bout Elves...but I forgive you...it's all for the character of Mya eh?
Good work!

So the scroll has all the spy info in it. Interesting...Mya is so cool! I love him! And Malice came up with the spell? Didn't see that coming. But hey, it works! Zeth was great too, as always. I think Zeth and Mya are my favs in this story. And we saw more of Jade too. I was begining to wonder what had happened to her. Update again soon!

Great stuff. Looking forward to more.

Ahh, I do love a good brawl! This chapter is quite amusing with the fighting and the reviving of the rumored affection between Nika and Malice. Makes for an interesting future plot. This Mya person seems very jolly, I like him already.

Excellent chapter! Is it a spell that causes everyone to fight when they hear Mya's name? I bet he came up with that. He seems like the kind of person who would do that for fun. Very cool. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wanna see what happens between Nika and Malice, and what the scroll for Mya is. I hope you can write more soon!

WHE! more! more! this is possibly the best story i've ever read! i absolutely love, i mean L-U-V, Malice *and that is an odd name...better than Tracy, tho* and it would be cute for Nika to fall for him, even if it was under a spell or sumthin like that. keep on writing!

hey! this is a really good story! It's a really creative idea! I really like your use of description.. it really draws the reader into the story! Good job! Looking forward 2 reading the rest!
~Aisatsana
Please review my work! I could really use sum feedback! Thanx!

Nice little chapter, though it felt as if it was dragging during the conversations between Nika and the others.
Keep up the work

Hey!
The much awaited Mya has finally appeared! Yay! This chapter needs more proofreading! Haha!
Anyways, the story is really getting somewhere now...I like how Nika can't use swords, it doesn't suit her anture...and hence makes a good joke!
More conversation between Mya and Malice about Nika would be good! Can't wait for more...

you know.. this is amusing at face value.. but it's even more amusing simply cuz you might have been directly QUOTING an april i know... wow i feel like i'm back home...lol

Excellent chapter! I was quite surprised that Nika couldn't sword fight...I guess no one's perfect, though. Nice humourous touch. So it's Malices' friend Mya that Nika is looking for? Well that's gonna be interesting when she finds him. I so wanted to see Nika beat the crap out of all those pirates, but hey, smashing a drunk guy in the head with a pot was just as good. Funny too. I hope you update soon!
PS - It is hard to describe a lot of detail in short stories. In the first version of 'Free' that I wrote, Raven was described in a lot more detail, but then it got too far off the point and way too long. But you would like him. Tall, olive skin, jet black shoulder length hair (Hence the name Raven), adventurous personality. I knew that you probably wouldn't like Oreana. She's a bit boring, but that's because she's never had a life. Anyway, my next short story 'Children of Drakness' should be much better. I wrote it yesterday, and I love it. It should be posted any day now. Sorry this is so long! I'll go now. Update soon!

finally finished reading it. its really good em. but hurry up with the rest of it plz. and also... is it wrong if i would have a crush on Malice if he were a real person? because... eh... i dont... i was just asking because a friend was wondering... yeah... a friend...