Reviews for Daughter of Flames, Child of Shadows
Gemema chapter 7 . 10/8/2003
I love this chapter. I probably say this about all your chapters, but it's true. I love this story, and I love where it's leading. This whole quest that Nika and Jade are on, inside their heads, is great. I can't wait for more!

Thank you soo much for your reviews on "Destiny of Three". I really appreciate it. Adrian is my fav too!
Gemema chapter 6 . 10/2/2003
Getting really interesting now. I love the whole split personality of Nika and Jade. It's really cool that they are both a part of each other. Nice twist to the story!

Thanks for your complements and review! I really appreciate it!
Hidden Relevance chapter 6 . 10/1/2003
a lousy pickpocket..lol... i'm a pretty good pickpocket actually! ::beam:: it makes my boys made when they're missing money...oops...

hm...this last section was kinda confusing... you kinda rushed over the descriptions of each Nika... it got alittle hard to keep straight on which was being described...just a thought...

keep going george!
Hidden Relevance chapter 5 . 10/1/2003
yay! i can finally get here! i dont' know why my author alerts hate me but they do... tis sad...

NEWay... i love this... 'so if existance goes bye-bye, the Gods go bye-bye too? no wonder they're scared...' she's showing a great personality! loving it...

man i was afraid the traitor was gonna be trice... i HATE it when that happens...
Gemema chapter 5 . 9/29/2003
Great chapter! I love the raven! Fangroar's character is really developing quite nicely, and so is Nika's. Can't wait to read more!
Hidden Relevance chapter 4 . 9/24/2003
have i mentioned just how deeply i HATE cliffhangers? le sigh...i'm loving where this is going...the fortune teller is awesome! and everything else is falling together very well...

oh...btw...if you're having that much trouble with the spelling you might think about getting a BETA reader to proof-read BEFORE you post the story...

that's actually what a lot of people have to do... so what ever you decide don't feel self- conscious about the spelling...it happens to all of us!
Hidden Relevance chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
wow...this looks quite impressive so far...a very intricate beginning...i like it...also (random comment) it's kinda cool, cuz my piece centers around a Sancutary... it'll be interesting to see any further difference or similarities that show up... neway...off to continue reading!
Gemema chapter 4 . 9/24/2003
Nice chapter! I love the old woman. So mysterious. And Nika. Her charcter is comming along quite nicely. I love the way you write from multiple peoples point of view. It really makes it more interesting to read. Well done!
Syrelen chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
A fine story, one to be added to my archives even. Hm yes your spelling is quite, well, bad. But then again you all ready knew that, and so did you know that "Daughter of Flames, Child of Shadows" is more than a fantasy of the imagination.

Oh yes, congratulations on becoming Visual Arts Captain. Paint-ball day shall be fun *wink wink
Gemema chapter 3 . 9/18/2003
Ah, the plot thickens. This is getting really interesting. I can't wait to find out more about who Nika really is.

Very intriguing. Keep it up.
Xiao Lao Hu chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Hey Tasslehoff!

I know this must look strange in amongst all these proper reviews, but when do u plan to just upload all the chapters!

I haven't done critiques but you know what I always pick up on...your spelling!

Now you be good and keep writing those chapters.

Spitfire awaits the drafts you don't want.
Gemema chapter 2 . 9/11/2003
I love the character of Zeth. Interesting development. Nika's character has also been really well done. The story itself flows really well too. Good job.
Orion Phoenix chapter 2 . 9/11/2003
Nice, very nice. Other than a few typos here and there, it's a good story. I hope you continue.

Phoenix
Weaver of the Tangled Web chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
I'm about to read your story now.

However, I did read your summary, and noticed one slight thing that you might want to correct.

"...what will happen to our heroin..."

Heroin the illegal substance.

Heroine what you're actually looking for.
Gemema chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
I'll get the critisism out of the way first. I picked up a couple of typos while reading your story, as well as a few sentences where words like "a", "the" and words like that were missing.

Apart from me being picky about spelling, this story was great! I was hooked after reading the first paragraph. Your word choice and the imagery you've created in excellent. The settings your characters are in have been described fantasticly, and your main character has been well defined and developed.

I would love to read more of this story.

Well done, and keep it up!
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