|Reviews for still needs a title|
| JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
That was excellent! It flowed so well and the rhythm was awesome!
| Nerf chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
i love this, as for the title, i can't reli title it for you. It's your work, and the title should come from what it means to you.
| kijochan chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Wow, this is so powerful.
| Invicto chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Very nice. Though I am confused about the flow of the words, I can't seem to figure out the pattern to them.
As for title suggestions, it'll come to you. I could sit here all day and quote off my ideas, (my personal opinion being "inner demon") but that won't help. Just think. It might takea while, but it'll be there.