Reviews for Stand Up!
fcf chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
The last line caught me off guard, I love the short, pointed sentences you really convey rage, it's terrific.

WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Oh that is so awesome!
C Shot chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Well the religous twist at the end really worked, well we all know how abuses God is, personally if I met him Id rip his fucking guts out.. hope I didnt misinterpret the last line, if I did please email me and explain it...

~C Shot~
Sarah-Angel87 chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
This is so full of emotion that I congradualte you on wour work. I can only imagin the pain in this poem, but I feel for the 'charactor.' With every word the reader can fell the rage growing more intence, and the relese the 'charactor' must feel. I can only imagin...Grate Work.