Reviews for Deepest Desire
Kouryou Sanomi chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
ok, you are officially my favorite poet ever. I'm adding you to my fav author's list.
Lilithian Rose chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
I loved your poem. I also feel that it truly goes into detail about what a real desire for someone feels like.
precious breakdown chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
yeah whoa, love it but it seemed more like a bunch of short poems, some about that guy "he whom i think about The reason, probably for the rain" (WHOA) and others about other things, dreams, stars, absolutely BEAUTIFUL words! but maybe some rhythem to enhance them?
Sarah-Angel87 chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
I love this poem. there is so much imagary, i can see what i am reading. there is so much emotion I feel like you must feel. A very good poem with a slice of your personal style in it. great job.