aw, it's adorable. _ yay

This is such a good story, I love it. Is this the end or are you continuing it? I hope you are!

Ah! So sweet! COntinue please. I love this.

oh! was that the end? if it was, then it was mucho good! yay for happy endings! i loved how everything worked out in the end! congratulations! yay for you!

oh no! she can't leave! that would be bad bad baddy bad! is terry gonna kiss her again?

oh he's so sweet!

and on a side note, i am so sorry that it's taking me so long to read this story. things are hectic...anyways, i DO like this story very muchly and please update soon!

yay this is moving along very well! i want to read more but my next class starts soon so i gots to go, but update soon!

wait, so the only clothes she brings with her are the ones she wore on the bus, pajamas, and a FRENCH MAID OUTFIT? wow. is that it?

yay! hot with a double t! hooray!

um, is he really 25? if he is, then why does he want to have a 15 year old girl around? is he some pervy weirdo who likes girls 10 years younger? i really hope not...

ohmygod sleeping on a greyhound is impossible. the seats hurt and if you close your eyes for even a second, who knows how many people will go through your bags while you're sleeping and steal your stuff? do NOT sleep on a greyhound!

Great story, please post more soon!

Nice story! I really enjoyed this! good job and please post something soon!

Have I reviewed this before. I'm confused. Anyway it's great. All of it is great. Can't wait for the next chapter.

*laughs* you used my idea, yay... im uber-spiffed.

And now I'm going to go melt into a little puddle and go "aw thats so cute, i'm gonna cry" for several hours.

Please, please, please don't let this be the end! I HAVE TO HAVE MORE OF THE STORY! Please write more! Well maybe you could write an epilogue thingy. Yeah that is what you should do! This is a great story! I love it! It is on my favorites list! It can end now! Please write more! *On my knees*