Very nice indeed - at least on par with your other work, and that's saying something. Your poetry and prose makes an excellent contribution to this site.

What's up, doc? (OK, too hard to resist this one...)

I really liked that. The flow of the words was easy and lazy, making me feel relaxed and warm inside. The same with the context. It was so tender, more loving than anything I have read (or written) recently.

Good work, as always.

PS

Have you seen the illustrations for my story "Brother Sun, Sister Moon"? The link in in my profile.

"...strewn with stumble stones..." Nicely writ...and easy for you to say, but perhaps it is said for you know many, perhaps most..have that fear and will never..."walk it all alone." Though in fact...we all do...

excellent thoughts...nicely put..thank you..amicus

Nice! Very Nice indeed! :) You know, It's the sort of poem someone can really connect with. :D