|Reviews for Lux|
| Obake-chan chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Sorry I'm getting later and later...
Like always, it's so beautiful. My image of a red city(and I don't know why, but it's half drenched with clouds)... oi.. Want to paint/draw picture.
I like the fourth line, second stanza! '...sun gathers enough courage to fac the world again-' OOhh..
| aleppine chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
I love your choice of imagery, words, metaphors, pictures, in this. Just the presence of a goddess adds something weighted to a poem, and the contrasts between the night and the day's harsh light and the metaphors you have attached to them - the groom and the bride, especially - all very intriguing. I like your style.