|Reviews for Laying in the Meadow|
| Suirenhe chapter 1 . 12/13/2003
| pippin tomson chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
lovley imagery and well built up.
| SpawnMeister666 chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
I almost felt I was in the meadow with you for a minute there.
In a strictly platonic way of course!
| SweetGrape chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
Rhythm is bumpy, but this is basically a pleasant, soothing piece.
Creates a picture around you of beautiful nature and serenity, peace.
'Paints the perfect picture of bliss'- that's what your poem does.
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
very pretty, and warm, love the warm mood thats set, good imagery too, nicely done
| handle187 chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
"Chicks calling to their mother"
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Nice and peaceful.
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