I love this poem! So I just wanted to review it, keep it up Jessie-chan! (that sounds so cute almost as cute as kyo-kyo)

When I finished reading I really had to wait a moment before I was able to actually think about your poem. It's great - kind of mind-taking.

I like poems that are not just "oh soo cute". yours made me think if I felt like this someday (i'm happy i didn't)

go on writing, you're really good

Laetitia

...When I finished this I literally got a chill through my whole body... Maybe it's because the wind hit me... or maybe it's really because of this poem. I prefer to think the second one. Anyways. When I was reading this, I was thinking it was just about somebody who hated someone else. And when I got to the last lines (my favorite by the way) "I don't have to take this, I'm sick of all your lies./You don't have to tell me its over,/I can see it in your eyes." I was shocked. I also loved "Why are your eyes so empty?/What has happened to you?/Was it me who made you so depressed?/If it wasn't, than who?" Ok, so I've already quoted half the poem, but it was that good. Truely awesome write... truely... truely awesome...