Reviews for Dark Suits
jester on the sideline chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
hm... very interesting, the dad thing though seemed a little...confusing? But I suppose it will work itself out once you've written more so please do!
~*LWH*~
Little Monkey Child chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
Oh wow, great job! You detailed really nicely, and while the end wasn't a complete cliffhanger, it set up a great beginning. KEEP WRITING!
~Little Monkey Child
Elise Justure chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Ãt's nice i like it, but you need to structure it... and use paragraphs otherwise it can be confusing :) and BTW thanks for rating Shadow Reign.
MusicalMuse chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
Wow. Great start. Looks like its going to turn out well. I'll be checking up for more chapters ~The Muse
Lily Pierce chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
What an interesting beginning! Erin and Tamara's parts were adorable.. And now I want to know what the ending means. _ I hope you'll post the next chapter soon!
BlackOrigin chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
Wow, now that's a good start. I hope you get the next part out soon1 /_