|Reviews for wingless|
| Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Very neat job. Had a lot of emotion in it!
| thornwitch chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
Wow, this is amazing. The 'trying to flap useless stumps' lines are extremely powerful and I love the overall feel of this poem. I'm writing a fallen angel poem too (but it definitely won't be as good as this!). Thanks for your review btw, :)
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
do you really feel this way? i'm Christian, you probably would know from some of my poems, and i believe He would catch you. i don't think it is ever too late for anyway, at least while they are still alive. but this is your poem, your belief, and i respect that.
| Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
How should I say it? It's like a person soughting for solace but only darkness seem to bind her...Wow, I don't even know what I am saying. This is beautiful...touching and heartwarming at the same time.
| The Black Rider chapter 1 . 9/13/2003
Very sad and intriguing. Definitely something to be contemplated. Great job.
| Mime chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Wow...beuatiful, really. Like the season poems, there are also many angel related poems on FP. You're are definately one of the better ones. Keep on writing!
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
That is AWESOME stuff! I don't know what to say...it was just so deep. So touching. So incredible that I can't even think of words that are adequate for a review. Just keep writing on...please.
| mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
boy do i feel you on that beautifuly done .. ~Nat~