|Reviews for The Lost Dimensions|
| jenny-reckham chapter 14 . 2/6/2004
coolio _ but i just wanted to say, what happened to his broken right arm? ive been pretty confused about it, i mean, you havent mentioned it or anything...so i was just wondering )
| jenny-reckham chapter 12 . 2/6/2004
wow, sounds an awful lot like the Matrix_ it's good though, dont get me wrong ) i like it a lot
| jenny-reckham chapter 10 . 2/6/2004
trench coats *drool* i have ALWAYS wanted a trench coat! but they've always been too expensive...*sigh* I'm gonna save up my money so i can get one )
PS- cool chappie _
| jenny-reckham chapter 9 . 2/6/2004
Heylo! ) I thought since your other stories were good, I would read this one! fun, huh? I REALLY like "The Assasin" though! I'm TOTALLY serious! ) Anywho, I'm gonna read on, keeday? good chappie, btw!
| bellesoleil chapter 27 . 2/5/2004
love the story...update soon! Check out my fics if you get a chance. Keep writing.
| alecatq chapter 27 . 2/2/2004
very good. down to business.
| decree of fate chapter 27 . 1/31/2004
loved it! definitely different!
| Olivia Muldoon chapter 27 . 1/30/2004
Okay. Good chapter, but with a few gramatical and spelling errors. You should really proofread your chapters before you submit them. I don't get confused (hey, don't ask me why) but others who do not share my psycho brain-power may be lost.
This has been yet another side-effect of my being semi-cray.
Anyhoo, it was good. Keep it up!
| HushedIceColdFears chapter 27 . 1/30/2004
O good chappie. I can't decide between long chappies or short ones.. oh well, you're the author... great story!
| randomnous chapter 27 . 1/29/2004
dont be surprised Enter, i like both of your stories and im sure there are other people that read them and dont review. keep writing!
| Olivia Muldoon chapter 26 . 1/28/2004
First of all *applause applause* thank you for the dedication!
Anyhoo, the chapter was short, but good. I still like this story and I hope that you will continue this.
Sorry, this is yet another side-effect of my being semi-crazy, plus I am on a serious sugar high right now, and I'm in school and doing this because I have finished the assignment and have nothing better to do.
| poodlefreak chapter 26 . 1/26/2004
A definite A for suspense- I'm dying to know what happens next!
Sooner or later, though, you're going to have to put a little more meat in your chapters... tell us a bit more...
But for now the suspense should work for a chapter or two more. Then, we gotta know.
Keep writing, I like your suspense but I hate not knowing what's gonna happen next!
| alecatq chapter 26 . 1/26/2004
good job. cant wait for more! _
| decree of fate chapter 26 . 1/25/2004
| HushedIceColdFears chapter 26 . 1/25/2004
You have a couple of mistakes again, just to let you know.
"He sat up and looked for the window"
Do you mean looked "at" or "searched for" I'm confused by that.
"Take off you hood?" Jack said
This sounds more like a command then a question but I suppose it could fit.
hint of fear **in** her strong but quiet voice
Yeah other than that, I think it's a good chapter. Keep up the good work. ;)