|Reviews for Hold back the Tears|
| AnnaSun chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
Wow lots of emotion in this poem. Great piece!
Thanks for sharing :)
| Andromeda chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
I agree, I love the transition of the last line "So I'll hold back the tears" and then how you changed it in the last stanza. It kind of just emphasis the anguish and maybe frustration of not being able cry, I don't know. I've only read 2 of your poems so far but I can already tell that you're a wonderful author and I look forward to reading the rest of it. Keep it up!
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
I love the repetition of that line, "So I'll hold back the tears" - it just really drives home the point of the poem.
Very powerful, emotional and moving. I loved it! Well done!