Reviews for Two grey
Demetria chapter 1 . 9/12/2003
Hi,

i just read your poem and i think it is quite good,

I like your use of repetition and also the metaphor in the poem in which you compare the towers to candles.

It was a very interesting comparison on a very touchy topic.

Regardless, personally i feel it was very well written and thought out especially when you come up with a metaphor that compares bright flames to grey concrete.

Well done.