i like this story and i can't wait to read more but i am so tired b/c i haven't gotten a good night of sleep all week and probably not for a while before that, so i will continue reading later and i have run out of things to say, so i like your story and good night.

c u l8r

-Brekke

i just thought that you should know that in the last paragraph of this chapter (3) you made a few typos "he might actually lean a less on" is what you typed but i think you meant "learn a lesson" just thought you should know.

c u l8r

-Brekke

hello, i was introduced to your story by my friend, dancing barefoot in my socks, who i think you should know b/c she says that you are using her suggestion in this story later on. i thought that you should know that the character, harris, that she suggested is my older brother. and he has dark brown eyes, not "sexy blue eyes", though i guess to any girl other than his sister, they could seem sexy. i think she got the idea that they were blue b/c my eyes are blue as well as my dad and other brother. Oh well. if you want questions answered about him from a neutral ground (dancing barefoot in my socks has a crush on him)(it makes things interesting)(hee, hee) please e-mail me. i don't have much else to say and i need to keep reading the story if i ever want to get to the part where my brother enters the story. so off i go! fare voyages fellow writer (hee, hee, i'm getting in a silly mood!)

c u l8r

-Brekke

OHMYGOD! i'm the hundredth reviewer! yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay !

*does signature dance in socks*

okies, i have no idea why my email wasn't working but i'll try to work that out...

ohmygod i never get picked for anything! i am so happy! yay!

well, i've reviewed all of your other chappies and i gave you an idea to cure the blockage, so, um, yeah. train of thought got derailed there. yeah. please update soon! i love your story!

wait, the new person has to be a girl? i was thinking that if you brought in a new guy who might have been taken captive by some other crew of selisse's and he happens to be really hot (6'2", dark brown longish wavy hair, sexy light blue eyes) and mixed him up with selisse, will, and paul, then there would be lots of fun going on...oh, and his name should be harris...

oh damn, i'm not the 100th reviewer. can i still submit a name? i really want to!

wait, they actually lost marcus? i thought they were joking...

do i get a pat on the back? or can i have a cookie instead?

yep i like poking the poo out of people too but they took my sword away. and then my stick. and they try to take away my pens and pencils but then i wouldn't be able to do my wonderful homework that enriches my brain, right? so i still get to poke people, it just hurts them less...

and, yes, it is very very very sweet!

hey, since nobody seems to want paul, can i have him? i think i might be able to comfort his broken heart...heehee,!

your writing is very very very good! sorry it's been so long since i've reviewed...my computer was down and kicking it didn't help its condition much (hehe just kidding about that). um, theres lots more chapters fo rme to read so off i go!

Global Nomad:

Thanks for reviewing! As for the collab thing, maybe I'll wait a few more days to see whats up with my other readers. If you feel you're not interested anymore, just e-mail or tell me in a review. But by the way this story is going so far, I love it! What kinds of genres would you like to write in? Any preferences? Well anyways, thanks so much! (Selisse is pretty cool)

Lots of love,

Alyssa Madison

Hey...okay good story (gotta love them pirates). As for the name the 100th person didn't give a name! Gr...oh well...how about you put all of the mentioned names into a hat and choose one. (by the way I used to review as sam but i registered, yippy)

Hope the writer's block clears up, Sam

great story so far! I like how you have them as friends first instead of straight into a relationship.

great story!