i feel sorry for the dude, cuz i kno just how he feels. but i still want her to be with will, because it's what she doesn't want, right now anyways. HaahahahahA! okay, write more soon!

~MEl

hee hee what's going to happen?

yay i have a place of honor! hooray! um, how old is prince william? can i have him? please? bravo i like this story!

Damn you update fast! I maybe get up one chapter in a week, and look at you go! Very good, update soon, lol.

sweet. that was funny. write more soon, no time to chat good show on in ten sec. bye!

~mel

Thanks for reviewing my story! I hope to get more of those from you in the future. I really like this so far, and I think I will go read more now~

BrokenIce

i love it! Write more! (too tired to type, damn! I can't even spell it I'm so sleepy!) lol, write more!

~Mel

aw... they are friends! yey! keep going!

I really like this story. I also really like that Anni and Will have a truce now. It was a little upsetting thinking about how you'll ever make them see the light. It does seem like they may be able to see a couple rays but not all of it. Update soon please!

you should have made it that if C won then S would have to marry Will. I can't spell the names, but write more soon!

~Mel

i hope he wakes up soon! hm... funny about the tim and cecile part. hahaa! more please!

r u chinese? cool, coz if u r, well cool! _

your stories is great. thanks for fixing up the slight confusion, i get what you are doing. love ur story.

Hehe, its funny, and cute.

Slightly reminscent of Pirates of the Carribean, but thats ok P It works anyways.

Love the characters.

Keep up the good work!

jess

xo

HEY! I skipped ahead and read the author's note at the last chapter ( although I havent read that far yet) I'm sorry if my reviews were harsh! This is an excellent story, and you are not a bad author at all... I just wanted to give you "constructive criticism" in that a few characters were not fully explained. Its often details that make or break a story but as an author its very hard to pick up on those things. Heck I do that crap all the time. I even put that two people watched the sunset that morning. As is if the sun sets in the morning. LOL.

Anywho, I am very much enjoying this story... its very original, and has lots of action! I also figured out that it is indeed from the past, because its not the current prince william. ( his brother's name is harry, not what you put.) so therefore, it makes A LOT more sense. YOu may just want to put an author's note before the first chapter that its not England's current prince william...so people dont just assume. YOu know, like silly me. LOL.

Great job thus far, I will read more as soon as i get the chance. :)

Panda

yey! reinforcement is in. i hope they let him out soon. sounds horible! more please!