Reviews for Princess of Pirates
MandyHubbard chapter 5 . 9/23/2003
I got a quesiton- Is this supposed to be THE prince william, or did you just use the name william? Because you sound like you are trying ot make it olden times, but prince william is modern..just wondering.
MandyHubbard chapter 3 . 9/23/2003
still done understandt eh captain, but im still reading...
MandyHubbard chapter 2 . 9/23/2003
THis one doesnt really make sense. Why does the captain laugha dn have fun with her? He should be on guard and spiteful. Plus, Pirates TAKE ships over, and kill everyone. WHy would she repeatedly visit the same boat? and if the captain knows her to be so fierce, he would be afraid. but he sends her to visit the crown prince? Thats not very good etiquette, as it goes. Still interesting, nonetheless.
MandyHubbard chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
Very interesting start. A little cliched that the flag is the white with black skull...but still good. That marcus fellow doesnt seem to fit his character, because he really does order the prince around,but perhaps that was what you were going for.

Anywho, good start, im off to read more.
zagato chapter 14 . 9/23/2003
That is so beautiful! I like Selisse / Annisse a lot. Please update
Tragedy is Love chapter 14 . 9/23/2003
This is an interesting story though the last chapter doesn't really make sense to me. one minute he's pushing her away because she's trying to seduce him and she like wants him. Next, he wants to have her and seduce her and she totally hates him and pushes her away. i don't get it but interesting story. i like even though i don't get that part! _
hannah chapter 14 . 9/22/2003
hey...really like your story...

fav character so far would be selisse cuz she's so spunky and interesting...what do i think in general? i think this is great...really good stuff...ok, this isn't stuff, it's your worl. and it's nice to just sit down and read it...even for a few times. keep it up!
ve chapter 14 . 9/22/2003
hahaa! goodness, i suppose they both don't like being forced into things. hope the prince is ok. i think i like tim, he keeps them in line. but i like all the characters, because there wouldn't be a story other wise. :) more please!
ShadowsMidnightScandal chapter 14 . 9/22/2003
Love it... update soon
StarsignLeo chapter 14 . 9/22/2003
poor dude, I like Will the best. Too bad his plane back fiered.

write more soon!

~Mel
me chapter 14 . 9/22/2003
you should concentrate on selisse and that prince dude
Finndabhair chapter 14 . 9/22/2003
Hm. Interesting that now he's doing the seducing, and she is refusing his advances. Very good, update soon.
Jazz chapter 13 . 9/21/2003
thats really good and i can't wait to read more! up-date soon~
ve chapter 13 . 9/20/2003
goodness! that was one of my guesses! now it's going to get interesting.. heehee.. write more!
ShadowsMidnightScandal chapter 13 . 9/20/2003
Great chapter... hope you update soon...
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