Reviews for Princess of Pirates
damoviefreak chapter 5 . 2/27/2004
This story is a bit short not to mention illogical. I mean, really, who's ever heard of a female pirate that was feared because she kidnapped men and had her way with them. And, come on, is that really a punishement for the kidnapees? And you really weren't kidding about having horrible grammar. In chapter 5 you switched from 3rd person to first person. You obviously don't know what a comma is 'cause you certainely haven't used any.
If you really want this story to go well I would suggest you try to go more indepth with your writing.
Keep trying,
Peace out
Lily and Tianra chapter 37 . 2/14/2004
god that took me like 3 hours to read
very good, i love it
keep going
it's awesome, i want to find out what happens
TTFN
Luv Yas
Lils
UPDATE SOON
kat6528 chapter 37 . 2/14/2004
Can't wait for the next chapter
Finndabhair chapter 37 . 2/13/2004
Relaxingblahblah? Lol, I love it. All I have to say about that is: FINALLY! Lol, I can't wait to read more, and I am curious about what is going on elsewhere.
Tragedy is Love chapter 37 . 2/12/2004
well, finally! *smilez* they figured something that's a fact out!
StarsignLeo chapter 37 . 2/10/2004
sounds like a fine idea to me. I liked this chapter though there were quite a bit of typos, but oh well, who cares? write more sooN!
~Mel
Perigen the Silver chapter 36 . 2/8/2004
oh my God! You have to write more! Please, please, please? It's so good! I can't wait!
~Perigen
Perigen the Silver chapter 22 . 2/8/2004
hey! Great job! I love how you put Annie and Will together! The story is awesome!
~Perigen
Tragedy is Love chapter 36 . 2/6/2004
i believe you can do it! um, yeah, hi!
will seems a bit too out of control, like too sensitive. _
moths-are-evil chapter 36 . 2/3/2004
hey, that was good, but when will Will and Anni have sex? This is driving me crazy. please up date soon!~bye~
Perigen the Silver chapter 13 . 1/29/2004
Oh my gosh! So that's who she is! Great work! What a twist to the story!
~Perigen
Perigen the Silver chapter 10 . 1/29/2004
This chapter made me smile. Selisse is so stubborn, lol. It's good!
~Perigen
Perigen the Silver chapter 9 . 1/29/2004
It is really good! I can't wait to read more. I love Will. :0)
~Perigen
Perigen the Silver chapter 2 . 1/29/2004
It's good so far! :0)
~Perigen
Finndabhair chapter 36 . 1/22/2004
Tee hee! I love it. I can't wait to read more, wink wink nudge nudge! Update soon please.
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