|Reviews for Edge|
| pointythings chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
This is very nice. I love the one-word lines 'Edge' and 'you' and 'living.' Also the line about hiding your long hair. Lovely work as always!Yours in writing,~pointythings~
| D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Your best piece. And my personal favorite.D.
| glitterjewele chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
i can't believe this doesn't have a review! it's fascinating. it isn't always clear exactly what you're trying to say, but that's what makes it interesting, if you ask me. it made me stop and think and ponder more than once, which was quite enjoyable ~ like deciphering a particularly well-phrased riddle. the language is beautiful. the format is excellent ~ the not-too-long lines do a very effective job of accentuating feelings and concepts. the edge in particular was most intriguing to me. i'm still not entirely sure what it is, but it has a sort of aura about it that lets you *sense* what it is, in some kind of subconscious way, which is very cool. :) alright my favorite lines from this would have to be, "my edge was awkward," "a piece of portable skin" (a most original comparison), "and hide my long hair," and "the crooked lover/from bad fiction." a great piece of poetry, i enjoyed it immensely. awesome work! do keep writing. ;)
P.S.- great pen name, by the way. :)