Reviews for Second Place
Wishdreamer89 chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
awesome, just so modern but heartfelt I can see. Great
Mistress Jakira chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Returning from a pretty long hiatus, I checked out my favorite author list and discovered you again. Your poetry is so honest and just cynical enough to twist my mouth into a wry smile without actually ruining my mood. Very interesting take on it-and connects very well with me and probably anyone else. Keep writing!
JTierra1988 chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
aw *cry* I love your poetry! Keep writing! _ JMBunny
JazzPizza chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
A fascinating metaphor that captures nicely how love inspires something more out of people.

Nice cadence, although word choice in a few places is a little awkward...also, a little more punctuation and separation would probably add to the dramatic effect. Overall, though, poetic talent and a natural style shines through in this poem. Well done.
J. London chapter 1 . 9/13/2003
You're right, Second place in someone's heart just isn't good enough. I am going through something like that right now actually. Very good, I like your style.