Hmm, i guess i didn't notice you posted this one.' A gem ne? Interesting... A bit of constructive criticism, try to vary your sentences a bit more. Not every sentenece has to start with 'I' when you're in first person. And using different words with similar meanings helps to not use the same words too much.

Might check for typo's. Ilike the stroy though, really interesting. Hope you can update soon, i look forward to it.

Me again, lol Ya know, Kaze sounds like Chie. From his use of 'dear' to his sadistic treatment of Kaikou. But other than noticing that,good chapters. Mayonaka is err, odd _ lol

Heyo, I happened to see you updated this. Nice past for Kurushimi, well not 'nice' but, lol, nice job writing it' I 'really' need to fix Tsukihana up so i can post it, but that's off the subject_ anyways , ja for now

La de da, tis me, Saku! You know, i think you'd get more reviews if you put this under 'manga' but that's just me. I wanna know more about their master, this 'Kaze' guy. Are you going to add any other charas? I'll read more when it's updated.

o this is a really good start i love stories like more please