Reviews for Invisible
hmact chapter 1 . 4/17/2004
I can really relate to this poem. And I'm sure alot of people can. Very well written. :) And thank you for your reviews. They're much appreciated. Thanks. Good luck with the rest of your writing career! ;)
Angels Soul1 chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
A really cool poem! I like how you have structured's really good!
Keep up the good work!
Thanxs for the review!
shinco chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
I loved that, it was so great! Had a lot of feeling and detail!

Please read some of my stuff too, I think you'll like them! _ You're a great writer!
Identity chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
this is really great. i really enjoyed reading it.
Seef chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
That is so adorable! Another great one! It's very lovely. I know *exactly* what you mean! yay! )
Princess Aiko chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
That's absolutely beautiful! You're a talented poet! ~*~
La Reine Plastique chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
this is really good! makes me think of the guys i fall in love with in my dreams .. lol
love-poet chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
hey this was so pratically is what I feel about all the online "relationships" I've's kinda why I decided not to have anymore..bc I can't have the physical touch..nothing big jus lil things like the caressing of my face..ya know..?