that made me feel totally at ease, amazing poem :)

Simply beautiful, it captivated me. I love every single line of this.

::waves:: Me again...had to check out more of your work! I read some of your profile and found out that you're Filipino too...Coolness. I live over in America, but I've always wanted to go visit the Philipines. My mom and auntie keep saying "next year"...but we can't seem to find the money to go, but somehow, someday, I know we will _

About the poem:

Nice flow. Sweet rhymes. Peaceful tone. I enjoyed this as well.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)

That was lovely I really liked that.

Wow... I am awed! I usually can't see how nature could be so inspiring - I am not a nature lover at all. But reading poems like these makes me think twice. Your poem is awe-inspiring ) You must be very inspired. Keep up the good work )