Reviews for Simply flames
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
I don't really have any idea what that poem was about but that's what I love! My only comment is in your summaries you critisize your work so much. It's not very becoming, especially when they are good.

Excellent job, as always.
My Little Poet chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
awesome! i really like this poem! very well written, i love the way you wrote it in fragmented sentences and the descriptions are incredible! great job!

Short-e chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
I agree with the other two who have reviewed this poem.

Them two lines freak me out a bit and i seriously dont get what it means

The other two stanzas were great though

The rhyming is good and everything flows well

Nerf chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
i reli like this, specially the first stanza. but i din't reli like the phrase 'Slugs crawl up her legs

And snakes out of her head', i don't reli get the meaning behind this.

But other than that, great!

Winged One1 chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Ok...the poem was really good until "Slugs crawl up her legs

And snakes out of her head" which is just kinda gross. THe rest of the poem is awesome, though, and I love it! The rhyming is nice. THe first verse is great! "Pink hushed lullaby"-I have no idea what that means but I like it anyway.

I love the line "Her eyes are simply flames"! But I guess you did too...'cuz its the title and everything...


Great job on this

winged one