|Reviews for End Of The Line|
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
I agree - bleak is definitely the word.
| SweetGrape chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
Doesn't necessarily have to be jail, could mean it as less literal and more symbolic.
Just very bleak and dead- feeling like there's no hope 'They know everything'.
The end jumps a bit at nervousness 'Whose idea' and finishes with a sighing wish.