|Reviews for Watch the Bird|
| Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
Aww, I felt so bad for that bird. By the end of it, I kept hoping that he would be able to fly.. so you can imagine what I felt when I read 'drop'. Great work and imagery!
| Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
I'm speechless. This is just amazing... Such an innovative way of writing has been implemented into this poem, and it turns out so beneficial to its meaning. I just don't know how you do it. Both you and this poem is entering my favorites... Once again, awesome job.
| Children of the Root chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
aww. poor bird. Awesome poem. You're very talented.
| Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
This is unique I must say and it is wonderfully written, taking a step forward into a whole new dimension.
| Miamouse chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
Just the right amount of repetition, oh thank god you didn't overuse it.
Enjoyed reading this.
| Evil Cranberry chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
If you think about it, all ideas for stories have been used at some point or another. How are we to know every single story that has been published-be it online, or offline, what have you. Even your little poetry fettish has been used time and time again.
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
aw...that is sad. It was so hopefull at first, and then he dropped. Way to keep me on the edge of my seat though!
Good poem. write on.
| Clockwork Angel chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
The imagery is amazing and the meaning is really very powerful...a great poem one of the poems I've ever been so interested because of its natural flow not forced...