Reviews for Decisions, decisions
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
You know how I feel about self harm, but besides that it was an excellent rhyming and the words flowed so well.

Good work.
me10 chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
just in response 2 the last review. the 'fine pink line' is the line you cut across your wrist, it leaves a fine pink line. i suppose its kinda silly cos when you want to end your life u dont end up with just a fine pink line. anyway i'll shut up now!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
This is an excellent poem & relaly powerful & i can definately relate but wahts pink? isn't a vein blue?
fizzysweet chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
kick ass! this poem conveyed alot of emotion..good job
Short-e chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
I think that was a really good poem.

I liked the way you repeated the last two lines.

:-)
Nerf chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
this is reli amazing. it flows beautifully, and has reli strong feelings behind it. the meaning is reli strong, and easy for me to relate to.

well done! i think that is the best poem i have read about the specific feeling.

XXNerfxx