Reviews for One Moment's Mistake
Emerson chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
This is maybe my favorite thing of yours. It is intense, and sad, but that's not really how it speaks to me. It speaks to me personally, in all my overt genius, about human nature. We all have odd behavior, and instead of angst, I would classify it as pessimistic psychology. But I think that whatever it is, it was well done. Maybe you should show this to a serial killer and see what they say. That would be interesting. Or, as the French say, "C'est tres interessante'. About the piece, 'Tres bien!'
initiative chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
this is really good. really really good. i don't think i've said that for a long time. i especially liked the end, how they might think they were invincible, and stuff. i don't know what to say, really. i'm quite speechless. everything was smack bang in place, kept pumping along, never missed a beat. i seriously don't know what to say.

keep up the great work.

mint chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
wow, this is well written. i like the easy flow of the piece. great job.!