|Reviews for Raising the heart rate|
| JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Short and sweet, I can relate to this poem so well. Great way of telling your feelings. I loved and related to the line: "This pain is everlasting, getting worse
It's all my fault, am I a curse?"
It's a question I've asked myself many times. Excellent work.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
very cool... everyone's felt that way before