|Reviews for Cage|
| nuclear red chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
This was nice, I like it. Very short and simple, but still beautiful. Keep up the good work! Always be yourself! -Nuclear Red
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Very cool way to put it.
~Heart of the Sword
| PurpleLilac chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
Don't mean to burst your bubble, that was a powerful poem but not really a haiku...Pattern is 5-7-5...But do keep writing! )
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
this was a very good poem...but it wasn't a haiku. A haiku is supposed to consist of 17 syllables. You have 17 words in this, but words are not the same as syllables. (the normal haiku uses 5-7-5 distribution between the lines).
The message is stil really awesome, and I loved reading it, but I just wanted to point out that it was not a correct haiku.
| Stormish chapter 1 . 9/16/2003