Reviews for Stone
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
I don't think it was crap, it wasn't your best but it definately wasn't crap. I didn't understand it all but that's one of the things that I like about poems. The only thing I'll say is you were rhyming too often it seemed. It could get a little forced. Otherwise good job
Cymoril Avalon chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
Hm...is this stone perhaps the persons heart, locked away for so long because of rejection? This can DEFINITELY be expanded.

PS - Evanescence is wonderful.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
It doesn't suck... the idea is very good... but I don't really like the rhyming... i dont understand how it fears if it doesnt know the sea is near... but it's a good try!
xyellx chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
It's not crap, I like it.